Maybe lighten up with the shadows. The shadow on the cheek on the side with the dog is nice and subtle but the darker shadow on the other side and the shadows on her throat seem to sit on top of the paper instead of blending. Less darkness and less shapes that you fill in with color, but more softer lines and more subtle colors in the shaded areas. I think the clock thing is not helping because it's making it like a cake you have to decorate within ten minutes. This is not the Great Baking show.This one will be $120, unless I really like the person who's interested in purchasing it.